1. Repair “Sam gave Alex the notebook because he needed it” when Alex needed it.
- He could refer to either person.
- Write “Sam gave the notebook to Alex because Alex needed it.”
- The repeated name makes the intended reason explicit.
English · Suggested Class 9 · school sequences vary
Paragraph Cohesion: Class 9 Reference, Links & Revision
A paragraph can contain correct sentences and still make the reader ask, “Who is she? Why therefore?” Cohesion makes the connections traceable.
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Build cohesion with clear reference, repeated key ideas and connectors that match the logic. A linking word cannot repair a missing reason.
Original BananaLearn guide · 7 November 2026
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Find a section, worked example or practice question
Read a complete draft before editing
Draft: “Mira showed Leena the model beside the window. She said it was too narrow. The model used cardboard. Therefore, the team painted it blue. This solved the problem.” Each sentence is grammatical, but the reference and reasoning are unclear.
Who spoke? What was narrow? Why would blue paint solve a width problem? Do not add more connectors until you can answer those questions from the intended meaning.
Distinguish cohesion from coherence
Cohesion concerns the visible language links between sentences. Coherence concerns whether the ideas fit together and develop a sensible line of thought. Clear pronouns and transitions help cohesion, but an unrelated conclusion can remain incoherent.
A paragraph full of however, moreover and therefore is not automatically well connected. Each word commits the writer to a relationship that the surrounding ideas must support.
Make pronoun reference unambiguous
In the draft, she could refer to Mira or Leena. Replace it with the intended name: “Leena said that the model’s doorway was too narrow.” That sentence also replaces vague it with the part being discussed.
Repeating a noun is useful when it prevents confusion. Avoiding every repetition can make the reader work harder than necessary. Once a referent is clear and nearby, a pronoun can keep the prose natural.
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Match the connector to the relationship
Because and therefore express reason and result; however signals contrast; for example introduces an instance. In “The doorway was narrow. Therefore, the team widened it”, the result follows logically.
“The doorway was narrow. Therefore, the team painted it blue” needs an explanation that is absent. Changing therefore to meanwhile might remove the false causal link, but it would not explain how the original problem was solved.
Use this with a clear summary noun
A bare this can refer vaguely to several preceding events. “This adjustment made the entrance wide enough” names the change being evaluated. “This colour made the model easier to see” would refer to a different improvement.
The summary noun is part of the explanation. Words such as decision, change, result and comparison can gather a previous idea without making the reader guess what this means.
Keep the paragraph’s focus stable
Choose one main task: explaining how the team fixed a model entrance. Details about cardboard matter if they explain how the doorway could be cut wider. Unrelated facts about lunch or the weather can wait for another paragraph.
A topic sentence sets a direction but does not replace development. Each following sentence should add evidence, explanation, an example or a consequence related to that direction.
Compare a complete revised version
Revision: “Mira showed Leena the cardboard model. Leena noticed that its doorway was too narrow for the toy figure. The team measured the figure and marked a wider opening. Because the doorway was cardboard, they could trim it without rebuilding the walls. This adjustment let the figure pass through. They then painted the model blue as a finishing step.”
The revised paragraph identifies the speaker, explains the relevant material, links the repair to the problem and separates decoration from the solution. It adds the missing reasoning rather than only replacing pronouns.
Use a revision record
For each sentence, write its job and the earlier idea it connects to. Circle pronouns and demonstratives; draw a line to their referents. Underline connectors and state their relationship in plain language.
Ask another reader to explain the chain without extra help. If they identify a different speaker or cause, revise the wording. This checks clarity in this text; it does not establish that every possible reader will interpret it identically.
See the reasoning
Worked examples and checks
2. Choose a connector: “The path was flooded. ___, the group used the bridge.”
- The second event is a response to the first.
- Therefore or as a result can express that relationship.
- However would suggest a contrast that is not the intended logic here.
3. Improve “The team tested the design twice. This increased confidence.”
- This is understandable but can be more precise.
- Write “These repeated tests increased the team’s confidence in the design.”
- The summary noun tests identifies what the evaluation refers to; actual evidence is still needed for the confidence claim.
Try, explain, check
12 questions with explained answers
Try each task before opening its explanation. These are original BananaLearn questions, not official exam or past-paper questions. Where several answers can work, the explanation gives the criteria.
In the draft, why is “She said” unclear?
Check answer and reasoning
Both Mira and Leena are possible referents
The reader cannot reliably identify the speaker.Does the draft explain what “too narrow” describes?
Check answer and reasoning
No
It could describe the model, a part or another object.Did painting blue logically fix the doorway width?
Check answer and reasoning
Not according to the supplied information
The draft gave no reason connecting colour to usable width.Which revised detail makes cardboard relevant?
Check answer and reasoning
They could trim the doorway without rebuilding the walls
It explains how the material supported the repair.What does “This adjustment” refer to in the revision?
Check answer and reasoning
Widening the doorway
The preceding sentences establish that change.Which connector signals contrast: however or therefore?
Check answer and reasoning
however
Therefore signals a result.Which connector introduces an instance: for example or nevertheless?
Check answer and reasoning
for example
It should be followed by a real example of the preceding idea.Is repeating a name always poor style?
Check answer and reasoning
No
It can prevent ambiguity.Can a connector create evidence that is not present?
Check answer and reasoning
No
The reason must be supplied by the ideas or facts.What is the difference between a repair and a finishing step in the revision?
Check answer and reasoning
Widening solves the access problem; painting changes appearance
The paragraph makes their functions separate.Name a useful summary noun after this.
Check answer and reasoning
For example: this decision, this test, this change
Choose a noun that accurately identifies the preceding idea.What should a second reader be able to explain?
Check answer and reasoning
Who acted, what changed and why the change followed
A clear chain is a practical check on the revision.
A checking record to use in your notebook
Copy these headings and fill them for one worked task, then for a fresh attempt. Use your own evidence rather than copying the model answer.
- Question or sentence
- What am I being asked to explain?
- Model or evidence
- Which diagram, rule or passage detail supports my method?
- Work
- What steps connect the question to the answer?
- Independent check
- Can I substitute, recount, trace a path or check the text?
- Next attempt
- What changes in a fresh example?
Choose the next useful step
- Connect claims, evidence and objections
- Revisit clear pronoun reference
- Apply the checks to a descriptive paragraph
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